I have combined your answers to questions about the Wesch video into this draft of a jointly created document.
Our goal is to provide a polished version of the draft -- a document that would be of interest to someone just beginning his or her studies. To do that, we will collaboratively polish and improve the draft by adding comments suggesting changes. Your assignment is to add two helpful suggestions for improving the draft.
When you have made your suggestions, make a screenshot of the document showing your suggestions and turn that in. (If it is unclear, show which are your suggestions).
Note that improvements can take many forms -- simple things like correcting a spelling or grammar error or more substantive changes like adding text or an illustrative image, rewording or expanding on something in the draft, etc.
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