Revise a poorly written short document

This comment was left on a blog post on PowerPoint presentations:

I think that power points are very imporan in the lectures bacause it gives you a visual reference to what the teacher is talking about.
Also if the teacher makes the power point presentation available the student can access it at anytime. I have had some good and bad experinces with power points.The good power points had videos and funny pictures. While the bad ones lack subtance had too many spelling errors and fail to capture audince.

I rejected it because it was so poorly written.

Turn in the following:

1. Read each sentence or fragment aloud. Which have grammatical errors?
2. List the point or points you think the writer is trying to make.
3. Rewrite the post in your own words.

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